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楼主 鸟语无能2009/6/11 9:34:00

是论文的摘要部分,翻译器实在无能了,改的也不知道到底对不对,……麻烦JMS帮订正一下~

中文和翻译放2楼

2 斯文的败类2009/6/11 9:34:00

?本文分为三个部分,本文分为三个部分,第一部分探讨了网络作为民意表达渠道产生的基础。第二部分引用人民网、天涯网等网站的大量资料、案例等,对网络作为民意表达渠道的积极作用,如推动公众政治参与积极性与热情,推动Zheng__Fu决策科学化与民主化等方面进行实证分析;同时,也对网络作为民意表达渠道的消极作用,如“数字”鸿沟导致公众政治参与不平衡,虚假民意和网络瀑力等问题进行阐述。最后针对其存在的消极作用提出了网络作为民意表达渠道发展路径的思考及建议。

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3 斯文的败类2009/6/11 9:42:00

This article is divided into three parts, the first part of the public network as the basis for the expression of channels.?The second part, collection the dates and cases from People's Daily Oneline and Tianya,paticipate in?the network as a channel for public expression of an active role in political participation, such as to promote public enthusiasm and passion to promote the democratization of government decision-making more scientific and empirical analysis, etc. ; At the same time, public opinion on the network as a negative effect on the expression of channels, such as "digital" divide resulting in an imbalance of public political participation, false public opinion, and network on issues such as violence. Finally, the existence of the negative role of the network as a channel for public expression of the path of development thinking and recommendations.
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4 = =2009/6/11 9:48:00

我想说英文摘要可以不和中文一样,重新写一段的其实……

5 = =2009/6/11 10:39:00

想说文法的部分有挺多地方都不太对

6 斯文的败类2009/6/11 10:40:00

我们老师要求一样的……本来用各种原文拼好了一段,但是她非让写个全文总结似的摘要,只能中文也改,应为也照翻……

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7 斯文的败类2009/6/11 10:41:00

to:lss~~那么不大对的地方可不可以告诉我怎么改T^T

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8 5L2009/6/11 10:48:00

This article is divided into three parts. The first part of the article discusses the basis for the use of internet as a channel for the expression of public opinion.
本文分为三个部分,本文分为三个部分,第一部分探讨了网络作为民意表达渠道产生的基础

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句子都太长了,定状补太多,想说中文都有点晦涩,按照原文的句型翻译成英文,以我的经验来看外国人大多是读不太懂的。建议分成短一点的简单一点的句子去表达可能会好一点,当然,如果你只是交给老师的作业而不是给外国人看的话就算了,不过语法上也有错误,老师也要扣分吧?

10 5L2009/6/11 10:59:00

第二部分引用人民网、天涯网等网站的大量资料、案例等,对网络作为民意表达渠道的积极作用,如推动公众政治参与积极性与热情,推动Zheng__Fu决策科学化与民主化等方面进行实证分析;
The second part quotes data and case studies from websites such as Renminwang and Tianya which analyzes the positive impact of internet as a channel for the expression of public opinion in various fields. These include the promotion of active public participation in politics as well as a more transparent and democratic(scientific)policy-making process by the government.

11 5L2009/6/11 11:01:00

Renminwang and Tianya which analyzes
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sorry should be analyze

12 5L2009/6/11 11:03:00

我懒惰了等下有空再帮你翻

13 斯文的败类2009/6/11 11:28:00

啊~~~~~跪谢5L的TX~~~俺们这是毕业论文的翻译…我大学四年英语完全柴废了,而且从来就对语法木概念……蹲等回来~~

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14 5L2009/6/11 11:50:00

同时,也对网络作为民意表达渠道的消极作用,如“数字”鸿沟导致公众政治参与不平衡,虚假民意和网络瀑力等问题进行阐述。
In addition, the negative effects of internet as a channel for the expression of public opinion is also addressed.Problems such as
“数字”鸿沟 ( ...gap?) which results in unproportionate political participation from the public,manipulated public opinion and the offensive cyber acts will be further examined.
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“数字”鸿沟 是什么意思?

15 5L2009/6/11 12:00:00

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哦。。。真难得
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最后针对其存在的消极作用提出了网络作为民意表达渠道发展路径的思考及建议。
In the final part of the paper,recommendations will be suggested with regards to the negative effects mentioned above and further considerations on the use of internet as a channel for the expression of public opinion will be made.

that's all=)

16 斯文的败类2009/6/11 12:15:00

啊,数字鸿沟是专业名词,这个查到就可以了~~~5L大好人啊~~~抱住抱住CHU~~

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“数字”鸿沟 是什么意思?

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大概是digital的代沟XDDD蛔虫一下

18 斯文的败类2009/6/11 12:18:00

“数字鸿沟”又称为信息鸿沟,即“信息富有者和信息贫困者之间的鸿沟”。在英文里面,数字鸿沟大多数时间统称"Digital Divide",也有时候叫做"Digital Gap"或者"Digital Division",本意是数字差距或者数字Fen_Lie。

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19 斯文的败类2009/6/11 12:23:00

那个,我再厚颜的给出前两段的中文和翻译,5L同学要有时间再帮看看好不好,这两段因为是直接COPY的别人翻译好的论文摘要所以觉得可能问题不大。

在当今社会,由于网络技术的飞速发展和互联网覆盖面的日益扩大,网络不仅是人们获取信息、了解社会、相互交流的便捷通道,更是社会公众针对各种重大社会现象和问题,表情达意、讨论公共事务、参与社会生活、进行舆论监督的重要平台

网络的出现催生了新的表意方式——网络民意。网络作为民意表达的渠道在当今社会可以说是一柄“双刃剑”,既有积极的推动方面,也有消极的阻碍方面。因此本文对网络作为民意表达渠道作以更深人的解读和探究,趋利避害,因势利导,使网络作为民意表达渠道能更好地发挥其正面作用。

Currently, due to the rapid development of network technology and the Internet coverage of the growing,? internet became not only a convenient channel by which People can get information and understand the society, but also an important public platform for people participate in public opinion, public affairs discussingand economic social and political life participating, as well as for supervision.

The emergence of the network leads to a new meaning way - network of public opinion. The network of public opinion in today's society is a "double-edged sword"it have positive aspects, but also have negative factors.Therefore, this article will take more in-depth reading and exploring on the network as a channel for the expression of public opinion, to obtain the advantages and avoid the disadvantages, in order to play a positive role as a channel for the expression of public opinion on the network.

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20 5L2009/6/11 13:43:00

Currently, due to the rapid development of network technology and increasing internet coverage, internet becomes not only a convenient channel for people to obtain information and understand the society, but also an important platform for them to participate in public discussions on important social issues and governmental policies, to express their thoughts and feelings freely and to be integrated into the social circle.Moreover, internet also places checks on the direction of public opinion

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舆论监督跟表情达意(freedom of expression 是不是点矛盾)

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The emergence of the network leads to a new meaning - network of public opinion. The network of public opinion in today's society is a "double-edged sword" which has both positive and negative effects. Therefore, this article will explore further on the topic of the network as a channel for the expression of public opinion and embark on a more in-depth discussion on ways which maximizes the advatages and reduces the disadvatages that the internet brings so that the internet can play a positive role as a channel for the expression of public opinion.


21 斯文的败类2009/6/11 13:46:00

恩,按LS改的通顺多了,那就按这个定稿了~~大谢~~

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22 5L2009/6/11 14:17:00

哈。。不客气。。
我刚好放假

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