请帮我翻译一小段英语~谢谢~我急用的

We were pleased to receive the GMAT scores that you sent to us.? As your admissions counselor, I wanted to check in to see how your business school search is coming along.? Which application deadline will you be applying under? As was indicated on your GMAT form you are interested in the MBA Program at Daniels, please feel free to contact me with questions as they arise during the application process.

好厉害！

研究生入学管理考试。。。。

GMAT都送成绩了

却。。。

~谢谢~这个是我写的回复~帮我看一下如何~~39

Dear Marcus Birney:
?? I feei so glad when I receive your letter.Now,I have finished the works which I should prepare before application(such as the ps? ),I will send my fomal applcating letter to scool these days .Being a graduating student I know that it is difficult for me to applicate the mba dirctly.Information I get from the internet let me know that the? college of commerce in DENVER is very excellent.So except the MBA I aslo want to take other subjects in your scool,such as finance .
? I feel so honor if I have the oppotunity to study at Daniels.If it will not bother you ,I want to know if there are any specific demand of the application of the Daniels
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这个是初稿,还没检查

Dear Marcus Birney:
?? I?feel so glad when I receive your letter.Now,I have finished the works which I should prepare for ?before application(such as the ps? ),I will send my formal ?appllication letter to schoolthese days .Being a graduated?student I know that it is difficult for me to apply for?the mba directly.Information I get from the internet lets me know that the? college of commerce in DENVER is very excellent.So except the MBA I aslo want to take other?major in your school,such as finance .
? I feel so honorable if I have the opportunity to study at Daniels.If it will not bother you ,I want to know if there are any specific demand of the application of the Daniels

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大概改了下..那个graduated 和major不确定哈

我发了~保佑我吧

对于其他的XQers的留言,我想说并不是看不懂,只是这个东西对我来说很重要,而这个学校又是我的首选~所以要慎重

多用被动句

比较地道